Michael J. Falotico Poet Tetractys

Really Seeing -- Show Me Anger Contest

Blind
                                                       to see
                                                      only the
                                                  cover and not
                                   the real story that is written inside..

                                 True beauty is under all the costumes
                                             that sometimes mask
                                                    what is real
                                                       and not
                                                         seen..


for "Show me Anger" contest

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Zzzzz Zzzzz October 12, 2011 at 3:00 PM An excellent write. Structure and poetic content are immaculate!

Joe Maverick October 7, 2011 at 5:09 PM Soup mail..!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 7, 2011 at 4:36 PM well we should have had this contest after the baseball game Michael luv.. then anger would be in full bloom with those Yankees disappointing everyone when they were favored..luv... well they will make some changes and C.C. is supposed to part ways with them.. maybe Jeter too..oh.. hope u and fair lady have a great weekend.. we are still moving and rearranging so much furniture for so many rooms...oh..luv..xoxo..

Joe Maverick October 7, 2011 at 4:03 PM A most intresting scribe here Michael, and my best wishes for success with this..also many thanks for the placement win in your recent contest..

Elizabeth Wesley October 6, 2011 at 5:55 PM Well, you are under control but the anger is so subtly portrayed. Nice verse my friend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 3, 2011 at 3:44 PM intense expressions of the emotion of anger Michael luv... perfect entry ... think contest was judged by Susan.. but have not been on PS much lately to keep up with winners.. so wishing u the very best luv... well the GMEN pulled out a reach squeaker yesterday.. they are lucky they won.. Yankees not so lucky.. made me sick to watch those bats shut down.. well let us hope for the best for them both .. hugs and kisses from your J.G. in aching back mode..haha..xoxo..

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2011 at 2:04 PM I like your intellectual and calm approach to the topic of anger here, Michael. Good entry!

Wilma Neels October 2, 2011 at 11:42 AM You took a different approach to the subject matter Michael, good luck for the contest hun.. love ya ;)

Michelle Campbell October 2, 2011 at 11:26 AM Thank you for your input. I guess that is not how I was feeling when I put my feeling to words.

Dinda Minardi October 2, 2011 at 11:11 AM Greatly written, Michael... those shallow people really annoying, aren't they? :)

Red Fiery October 2, 2011 at 10:16 AM Perfectly crafted work Michael ! All the best...one vote from my side...