Realizing life is short too late

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aborted ambitions time squandered dreams abandoned a life mismanaged a ship with no one at the helm subject to the currents and the whim of winds idle and adrift we've run out of options and out of time it's the end of the line AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Submitted on June 2, 2025 for contest YOUR CHOICE T sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - Honorable Mention

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/3/2025 10:27:00 PM

given that what comes and goes is unreal, sooner or later we must pause in silence to inquire, ‘who am I’ in as that eternal light, in cave of heart aflame.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2025 4:37:00 AM

In asking that question, we begin our quest...

Frank Sheehan

Date: 6/3/2025 4:06:00 PM

This piece rings of truth. Powerful pen. Nice rhythm and flow. Thanks for posting.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2025 4:38:00 AM

Thank you very much, Frank. Much appreciated ~