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Reality's Angel

I am Reality’s angel resting on the broad shoulders of discovery the truth feeds darkness and engulfs its target ideas and concepts in turn become meaningless to you there is a creator of all things He is just and patient many still have fallen into the masses of shadow wrapped in their own filthy idols of philosophy I have seen grown men fall like rose petals and weaklings rise into unjust leaders forever the follower of furtive evil dominating only to remain inferior the most important answers lie in the unseen regions where no sense can fully give assurance the mind that so many unreasonably twist and turn grows weary because of the distance it must take and truth be told the distance is not what frustrates it is knowing we are seeking something far that could very possibly not exist, that our minds can twist into theoretical, idealistic nonsense it is knowing all we really think we know is meaningless and yes—even a lie all that has been written thus far rests under my wings under the warmth in which you refuse to feel can you believe in me— though I am completely unseen? how much more difficult would it be to see Him?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/31/2013 7:32:00 PM
Laura, Your words ring true and reach into the deep recesses of our questioning minds. Spoken like a true existentialist. Welcome to the club. Allan
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:35:00 AM
Hello Laura, the poem is well done... amazing... deep.... strong imagery... soup mail...Linda
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Date: 8/30/2013 7:21:00 PM
Hi Laura, Thought provoking write.. Ken
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Date: 8/30/2013 6:35:00 PM
aw neat poem. Great words and insightful. Proposes thoughts to the audience and holds a powerful message. Amazing. --Becca
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:04:00 PM
Beautifully written! The foolishness of the world shall always hide the truth.
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Date: 8/30/2013 2:16:00 PM
This is your most masterful and mature write Laura - exquisite philosophy, truth, feeling - you have gone to a new level - why wait for truth when we can make it - J.A.B. %
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Date: 8/30/2013 9:33:00 AM
Ah if only I had your talent. Beautifully written. Amazing content. The last two lines wrap it up nicely. Keep on rocking my friend~Kilmer
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Date: 8/30/2013 8:27:00 AM
A plea for humanity to look through value's surface. To cherish the cracks in our surface, but use them not as an excuse to be weak...to see things with an ignorant eye. Believe in what matters, beyond the surface. Embrace it. This was so awesomely powerful.
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Date: 8/30/2013 1:53:00 AM
- Laura, one of your wonderful poem ... marvels and deeply written. - Proficient ... proficient, my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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