Real Victory

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March- 25- 2025

Two Line Quote Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Rick Parise

'Fools hasten to defeat others and establish victory, Not knowing, real victory is victory over oneself... one's impulsive instincts'

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/25/2025 9:18:00 AM

Dear Valsa, I just love how you highlight the idea that many rush to conquer others without realizing that the most significant victories come from introspection and self-control. It’s such a valuable perspective! It encourages a more mindful approach to life, where we focus on personal growth rather than just competition. Good Luck my Valsa in the competition. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/24/2025 11:39:00 PM

Almost proverbial. Two great lines, dear Valsa.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2025 10:59:00 PM

A classy one