Suzanne Delaney Poet Free verse

Real Romance

Fantasy 

Chocolates,
red roses,
kiss me now.

Pink tea lights,
red satin
negligée

Eyes promise,
lips confirm
lovers' vows.

In Real Life 

At my door
fresh flowers,
imagined.

Romantic 
Valentine,
you are not,

yet each day,
you provide
all I need.

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Nette Onclaud February 18, 2016 at 3:48 AM how true... but let your romance stir him today, suZ... lovely!..huggs

... Gigno February 17, 2016 at 10:18 PM !!!

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2016 at 3:46 PM very nice. Now I need to go see the rules on this form. Looks like it is purely based on syllable count?

Timothy Hicks February 17, 2016 at 12:54 AM This was really sweet, Suzanne. You exalt the ordinary as being the real beauty, and the fantasy as being frivolous. Your short phrases and contrast worked well with each other. Love sincerity, as always. Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2016 at 2:48 PM Thanks Tim: You always 'get' the essence of things, Loved always, SuZ