Real Pain

You see the scars
Your scars to harm
To harm yourself
To harm yourself for how you felt
How you felt with all the pain
The pain that won't go away
The pain that won't go away until you feel
Until you feel something real
Something real, real pain
Real pain that distracts the way
The way you feel
The way you feel, your heart aches
Aches from something lost
Something lost
Taken from you
Taken from you, something you loved
The thing you loved
Gone for good
Gone for good but not these scars
These scars that reminds your heart
Reminds your heart to never forget
To never forget, all of it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 24, 2017 at 6:41 PM
I think it's pretty relatable, I liked it even tho it was sad, it was good
Harris Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 12:57 PM
Your use of repetition is very effective in this poem!
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August 8, 2017 at 4:56 PM
Awe, this is an emotional write. I think some of us can relate to this. Some scars are everlasting there... hugs :)
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