Real Love

Symphony is playing softly in the background.
He seems to be out more now.
He calls me regularly telling me his whereabouts.
Then he comes home after his workout.
Our relationship is on the up and up.
The heights we reach states we are a perfect couple.
     Our talk about the day brings a closeness.
     As the clock chimes late, we both sigh for a mental release.
We find each night of intimacy to be quite fulfilling.
This time we have together, we cherish.
Our wedding vows were written by each.
We rejoice.
We both play our part.
Our happiness is based on love and trust.
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PENNED ON AUGUST 28, 2014!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Lovely romantic write, Verlena. Congrats
Walker  Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Yes yes Verlena it's true love u hv found my friend! Beautiful write ,, congrats on huge win!
Walker  Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Dr. Upma for the congratulations. Verlena
Devonshire Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Dear Verlena, How wonderful you found such happiness in your marriage. Surely, the emotions you describe represent true love. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Walker  Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Thanks Carolyn for your congratulations. Verlena
Mcintosh Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest. I enjoy your words. God bless you and happy writing. With love and prayers, Gina
Walker  Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 12:52 AM
Thanks you Gina. Verlena
Bordner Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 8:25 PM
I'm lovin this poem of comfortable partnetship, its expressed so clearly and graciously Verlena. You've touched the soft side of my heart tonight. Customized wedding vows, happiness and trust, ah, romantic. J.A.B.
Walker  Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 8:30 PM
I thank you Justin for your super-awesome response. This is the way romance should form but, also, differentiate.
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Nice show of your feelings Verlena.
Walker  Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Brenda for your supportive response. Verlena
H. Chouhdry Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 2:33 AM
Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely
Walker  Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 3:44 AM
Thanks Shahid for your complimentary remarks. Verlena
Nance Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:59 PM
This brings a smile to my face, every night I wait up for my husband to come home from work (which will be in 15 minutes now) just so we have that talk, then intimacy. I love that you are so completely in love, a relationship based on love and trust, that is excellent. :) big smiles sweetie:)
Walker  Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Thanks Casarah. However, FYI is I am not married. I was married. A reminiscence that's all. Sending a hug, Verlena
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