Real Love

Real love is a nagging wife
That wants your insurance by ending your life
Real love is being kicked out your house
Like an unwanted pet mouse

Real love is not a thank you for doing this and that
Real love is been told “is that all you did by a grumpy old bat
Real love is humiliation in front of her friends
Ridiculing you with no end

Real love is breaking your soul
Making you worthless instead of being whole
Real love is when you take that carriage
Hiding itself and revealing itself after your marriage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/22/2012 4:49:00 PM
Sidney, wow... some loves are sneaky... , enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD
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Date: 8/31/2011 12:44:00 PM
LOL.... some folk are not so lucky as others in love! great write Sidney.
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:13:00 PM
Bahahahahah. xD
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:47:00 AM
That is real tough love.
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:22:00 AM
I have to think about this one! Very thought evoking indeed. sydney. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/28/2011 4:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2011 7:40:00 AM
Heya Sid, congratulations on your win :-) lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:16:00 PM
yikes...some tough love here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/27/2011 6:32:00 PM
Congrats Sidney my friend ..on a great win in this contest with these more than fantastic words luv...
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Date: 7/27/2011 6:27:00 PM
Had to read it again and I agree, it is a winner - congrats! Soup mail Sid.
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Mose's "Best Shot" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 1:36:00 PM
congrats on the win, my friend.
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:40:00 PM
hey Sidney, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:59:00 AM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John,Sydney
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:44:00 AM
Sidney, humorously True!!!! The sponsor receives the grace. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/26/2011 2:29:00 PM
i must say i thought this was a serious piece till i got your hilarious tone midway, sid... smart move! resreshing and funny! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/25/2011 1:11:00 PM
Poor Sid, Is it that real, come to me and I'll hide you under my wing. Seriously, great humor in this!
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Date: 7/25/2011 8:17:00 AM
oh no....sounds rough....you can stay on my porch any time....I will make sure you get food. hehe.
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Date: 7/25/2011 4:47:00 AM
reminds me of my ex, thank god shes gone , great poetry
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