Sidney Hall Mad Poet Poet Rhyme

Real Love

Real love is a nagging wife
That wants your insurance by ending your life
Real love is being kicked out your house
Like an unwanted pet mouse

Real love is not a thank you for doing this and that
Real love is been told “is that all you did by a grumpy old bat
Real love is humiliation in front of her friends
Ridiculing you with no end

Real love is breaking your soul
Making you worthless instead of being whole
Real love is when you take that carriage
Hiding itself and revealing itself after your marriage.

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Poet Destroyer A November 22, 2012 at 4:49 PM Sidney, wow... some loves are sneaky... , enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD

Kate Mcnaughton August 31, 2011 at 12:44 PM LOL.... some folk are not so lucky as others in love! great write Sidney.

Dana Smith August 4, 2011 at 10:13 PM Bahahahahah. xD

Honestly J.T. August 4, 2011 at 12:47 AM That is real tough love.

Elaine George July 29, 2011 at 9:22 AM I have to think about this one! Very thought evoking indeed. sydney. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Sara Kendrick July 28, 2011 at 4:34 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Wilma Neels July 28, 2011 at 7:40 AM Heya Sid, congratulations on your win :-) lfde Wilma

Debbie Guzzi July 27, 2011 at 8:16 PM yikes...some tough love here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 27, 2011 at 6:32 PM Congrats Sidney my friend ..on a great win in this contest with these more than fantastic words luv...

Elizabeth Wesley July 27, 2011 at 6:27 PM Had to read it again and I agree, it is a winner - congrats! Soup mail Sid.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2011 at 2:24 PM Congratulations on your win in Mose's "Best Shot" contest Sidney. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse July 27, 2011 at 1:36 PM congrats on the win, my friend.

David Williams July 27, 2011 at 12:40 PM hey Sidney, congrats on your win, David

Dr.Ram Mehta July 27, 2011 at 11:59 AM My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John,Sydney

John Freeman July 27, 2011 at 11:44 AM Sidney, humorously True!!!! The sponsor receives the grace. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud July 26, 2011 at 2:29 PM i must say i thought this was a serious piece till i got your hilarious tone midway, sid... smart move! resreshing and funny! :) huggs, nette

Elizabeth Wesley July 25, 2011 at 1:11 PM Poor Sid, Is it that real, come to me and I'll hide you under my wing. Seriously, great humor in this!

Doris Culverhouse July 25, 2011 at 8:17 AM oh no....sounds rough....you can stay on my porch any time....I will make sure you get food. hehe.

Steven Cooke July 25, 2011 at 4:47 AM reminds me of my ex, thank god shes gone , great poetry