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Real Love

Real love is a nagging wife That wants your insurance by ending your life Real love is being kicked out your house Like an unwanted pet mouse Real love is not a thank you for doing this and that Real love is been told “is that all you did by a grumpy old bat Real love is humiliation in front of her friends Ridiculing you with no end Real love is breaking your soul Making you worthless instead of being whole Real love is when you take that carriage Hiding itself and revealing itself after your marriage.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2012 4:49:00 PM

Sidney, wow... some loves are sneaky... , enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD

Kate Mcnaughton

Date: 8/31/2011 12:44:00 PM

LOL.... some folk are not so lucky as others in love! great write Sidney.

Dana Smith

Date: 8/4/2011 10:13:00 PM

Bahahahahah. xD

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/4/2011 12:47:00 AM

That is real tough love.

Elaine George

Date: 7/29/2011 9:22:00 AM

I have to think about this one! Very thought evoking indeed. sydney. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2011 4:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/28/2011 7:40:00 AM

Heya Sid, congratulations on your win :-) lfde Wilma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/27/2011 8:16:00 PM

yikes...some tough love here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/27/2011 6:32:00 PM

Congrats Sidney my friend ..on a great win in this contest with these more than fantastic words luv...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/27/2011 6:27:00 PM

Had to read it again and I agree, it is a winner - congrats! Soup mail Sid.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2011 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Mose's "Best Shot" contest Sidney. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/27/2011 1:36:00 PM

congrats on the win, my friend.

David Williams

Date: 7/27/2011 12:40:00 PM

hey Sidney, congrats on your win, David

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2011 11:59:00 AM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John,Sydney

John Freeman

Date: 7/27/2011 11:44:00 AM

Sidney, humorously True!!!! The sponsor receives the grace. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/26/2011 2:29:00 PM

i must say i thought this was a serious piece till i got your hilarious tone midway, sid... smart move! resreshing and funny! :) huggs, nette

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/25/2011 1:11:00 PM

Poor Sid, Is it that real, come to me and I'll hide you under my wing. Seriously, great humor in this!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/25/2011 8:17:00 AM

oh no....sounds rough....you can stay on my porch any time....I will make sure you get food. hehe.

Steven Cooke

Date: 7/25/2011 4:47:00 AM

reminds me of my ex, thank god shes gone , great poetry