Real Love

i found a love,so rare and 
true.                                                                                                                               
 a love only read about in books or seen in 
movies.                                                                                                                           
 a special person,whos very touch ,puts me in another 
world.                                                                                                                             
 one single kiss from her.makes my whole body jus go 
liquid                                                                                                                               
 if shes away from me for one day,i feel so empty without 
her                                                                                                                                 
 i cant even find the words to tell her how i feel and what she means to 
me.                                                                                                                                 
 but i look forward to a lifetime of showing 
her.                                                                                                                                
  i love you S and look forward to growing old with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 10, 2010 at 10:01 PM
You know already that I love this! ....my favorite part but i look forward to a lifetime of showing her. i love you S and look forward to growing old with you
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June 10, 2010 at 10:33 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning David. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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