Real Life Shoe Fable

Real Life Shoe Fable

Old Woman with too many kids
Lives in ancient shoe
Kicks out the heel
And puts in a pool!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 9:13 AM
I am revisiting old favs of mine today Where are you now? It seems you have not been here in a while. Anyways, this remains a great funny!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 2:05 PM
this is wonderful. A FAV
Culverhouse Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 3:52 PM
I still like it!!
Cheeseman Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Different slant Jeralyn liked it Daniel
Culverhouse Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:24 PM
I like it!! that is what I need to do!
Richards Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 8:33 AM
How clever and witty .... this is a gem!! Love your poem! ~ Carrie :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 5:32 AM
Got everything in control now. They are so busy swimming and eating that they can't bother her. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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