Real Feelings

Moni Mo you make me smile,
everyday is like trial,
being thrown at us to smash and tackle,
you mean alot to me,
you make my heart beat like a melody,
that makes me fall in love more and more,
with each pasing day,
does your love grow the same,
some say not trust me, 
alot of just talk s***,
ima slap them in the mouth with a big old fat d***,
let them talk s***,
because you and i are legit,
say what you say,
you wont change our ways,
we know eachother very well,
i swear if he leaves me behind,
ill end your world right along with mine,
Moni Mo you know what you do,
don't  make the mistake of leaving me behind,
who know what all could happen,
if you go out of state tonight,
i best be going to,
if you leave me in the dirt,
ill hike all the way to you,
your the best thing i could ever ask for,
like from Santa Clause on Christmas,
all my wishes came true,
finally meeting a down to earth guy,
that is you,
especially when you look me straight in the eyes,
i can read you inside and out like a book full of secrets,
that were never meant to be touched,
so i wrote you this poem form me to you,
please don't think im totally crazy,
im just blonde crazy white b****,
but now that im yours and you are mine,
my mind can finally relax and unwind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/26/2014 12:37:00 PM
I love this peom from start to finish. Wonderfully written.
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