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Real Feelings

I feel the world falling underneath me. If I take steps I will see. How life can really be. Iv ran into denial. No one knows how i feel. Like nothing is even real. But once I peel back the layers of sadness. I enter a state of madness. This corrupts my soul. Like there is an empty hole inside my heart. I think I’m about to fall apart. Then I see what happiness is in life. Once I start to really strive. My whole life goes live. Emotional fireworks explode. Then I know I can never be controlled. All my feelings disintegrate. Now nothing can penetrate my mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2011 8:40:00 AM
Way to go Dylan!!! nice poem and good job on explaining your emotions!!!
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:08:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dylan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:16:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:51:00 AM
Strong write on inner thoughts and deep feelings...enjoyed your work
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:42:00 AM
can feel the emotions! Welcome to the site.
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:10:00 AM
Nice self introspective thoughts on Real feelings you have penned, Dylan
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