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Real Eyes

Everything you say Has no truth behind it Maybe you should pray Maybe you should quit You’ve been caught You’re time is up Maybe you weren’t taught That real eyes Realize real lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/12/2012 7:17:00 AM
Love that last stanza! A witty proverb coined.
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Date: 10/12/2012 6:51:00 AM
this is a very cool poem!!
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Date: 10/12/2012 6:26:00 AM
Very nice. I particularly like the last 2 lines.
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Clare Doyle
Date: 10/12/2012 6:28:00 AM
why thank you(:

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