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Real Beauty

You see the ugly scars
I see the beauty inside
You see the struggles and worries
I see the strength that makes it worth it
You see the pain and sorrow
I see second chances in the morning

Where you only see the despair
I see the value of time spent
Reflecting on what is most important
The heart and soul – the dreams within
The joy that comes from knowing
God’s grace is always there for us

You see the grief and mourning
That comes from death’s calling
I see the love that brought life
To the soul who has gone on
The breath of joy given to those
Who know death isn’t really the end

Where you see only the decay
Left behind by autumnal arrays
I see the fiery oak, maple and birch
All of those heavenly displays
That brought us such amazing sights
Whispers of laughter in the starry nights

You see the darkness in the evening
While I see only the deep silence
Revealing soft feelings so powerful
They remind me that I have been blessed
By the kind caress of answered prayers
The happy thoughts within God’s breath

Where you see the pain that thrives
Breaking both hearts and minds
I see the lessons that have been learned
Taught by the anguish of a soul
Who knows that God will reassure
With renewed faith, hope and love
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Seeker Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 8:21 PM
Beautiful and inspiring, instilling love and optimism in all hearts!
Wolf Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 8:47 PM
The strength we derive from the hard parts of our lives ~ that's what helps us thrive. The beauty's in the struggle. Poignantly penned, Gina. Superb, methinks. :) gw
Rose  Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 3:35 PM
God is always a comfort in times of trouble and uncertainties, you are one strong brave soul, optimistic and kind. Thank you for sharing your heart felt poem today. Blessings.
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February 25, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Your bright view on life is enhanced by your faith, Regina. That's why some of us see a glass half full and some see it half empty. Your poem is beautifully penned in a delightful free verse form! Best wishes, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 8:14 AM
- Love your comparison between positive and negative, Gina ... always try to see the little things that mean so much ... "the real beauty" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 25, 2021 at 7:36 AM
Great work using comparations. For every positive in life there is always a negative. Attitude seems to equal altitude. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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