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Time Stops For No One Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Sara Jama. Date written 01/28/2025.

In Yalto form: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

 

 

ready, set... GO! time's a thief p u r s u e whatever goal you covet; don't wait for lawn grass to grow... under your two feet; time isn't so patient when you're standing still; chase after that rainbow and... claim your pot of gold!

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Date: 1/30/2025 1:13:00 PM
Edward, Fine Carpe Diem message in tumbling descent turned to gold. Whatever your goals, hope you claim them all. -Richard
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/30/2025 5:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Richard:-)
Date: 1/29/2025 3:56:00 AM
This is inspiring! Time is indeed a theif! I love the shape, the encouragement, and the flow of your poem. Nice!!!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/29/2025 5:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kathleen:-)
Date: 1/28/2025 8:27:00 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love your ending. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away..................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/28/2025 7:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)

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