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Time Stops For No One Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Sara Jama. Date written 01/28/2025.

In Yalto form: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

 

 

Ready, Set, Go


ready, set...
     GO! time's a thief
           p  u  r  s  u  e
                whatever goal
                      you covet; don't wait
                           for lawn grass
                                 to grow...
under your
     two feet;
          time isn't
               so patient
                    when you're standing still;
                          chase after that rainbow
                               and...

claim your pot of gold!
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Theraven Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Edward, Fine Carpe Diem message in tumbling descent turned to gold. Whatever your goals, hope you claim them all. -Richard
Ibeh Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 5:54 PM
Thank you very much, Richard:-)
Hassall Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 3:56 AM
This is inspiring! Time is indeed a theif! I love the shape, the encouragement, and the flow of your poem. Nice!!!!
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 5:11 AM
Thank you so much, Kathleen:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 8:27 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love your ending. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away..................
Ibeh Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 7:18 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
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