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Ready

for

Love

Ready For Love

red, satin pillows
soft music, wine, chocolate--
     bed of roses waits






*February 4, 2019
Tania Kitchin’s Valentine Senryu
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Jack Horne

April 11, 2019 at 2:35 PM

glad to see this romantic write was a winner, hon

Alexis Y.

February 9, 2019 at 9:38 AM

Hi Carolyn, You created such a lovely scene for Valentine's day. I like what I saw. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-)Alexis

Jan Allison

February 8, 2019 at 5:24 PM

Returning to say many congrats on your win Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

February 8, 2019 at 7:21 AM

Hi Carolyn, congratulations on your win with this excellent Valentine Senryu. Much deserved. Let the love flow, the scene has been set by your beautiful words. Let the love ever sing. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2019 at 7:46 PM

congrats, Carolyn. I got waylaid today with other things and am falling way behind here now!!

Tania Kitchin

February 7, 2019 at 4:24 PM

A very romantic senryu Carolyn, congratulations on your winning placement!

Eve Roper

February 7, 2019 at 3:51 PM

Great Senryu, Carolyn, have a Happy Valentine's Day.. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*

M. L. Kiser

February 7, 2019 at 2:51 PM

What a surprise lay in store...congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 7, 2019 at 12:53 PM

- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valerie Staton

February 7, 2019 at 4:16 AM

You said a lot with a limited amount of word. Romance so beautifully expressed.

Arthur Vaso

February 6, 2019 at 7:17 AM

You sound Canadian! :) Loved this.

Nette Onclaud

February 5, 2019 at 9:09 AM

carolyn, more ready for love... you got all the ingredients which prepare the right setting for this special moment... adorable!...huggs

Line Gauthier

February 4, 2019 at 10:41 PM

Bravo, Carolyn. this is lovely.

Sara Kendrick

February 4, 2019 at 6:32 PM

Creative and romantic. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page to let me know I placed in your contest. Thanks for the honor of being there. Sara

Rico Leffanta

February 4, 2019 at 6:03 PM

Sounds more like romance than love; men seldom notice the surroundings. Bone chance! Aloha! Rico

Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2019 at 4:34 PM

by the way, thanks for my placement. I could not have expected better with all the stunning entries I saw in your contest.

Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2019 at 4:33 PM

sounds like my daughter's first wedding night (she actually had two since she divorced the first guy!) A romantic man does not always make for a good husband. This is sweet.