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Ready For a Magic Pill

Let us pretend you have a magic pill. If you decide to take it, You can wake up tomorrow as someone else. A new look, a new age, a new person, You can live in any country in the world. You can live on another planet. You can be famous, rich, or just be you. Choose wisely, as you can never Ever go back. You have Twenty Seconds to Decide. 20 19 18 17 16 One fourth of your time is up. When I get to one, your opportunity Is over. 15 14 13 12 11 10 Do you realize how little time you have left? 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 Just as I thought.

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Date: 10/25/2018 9:38:00 PM
Oh if it were only real; wait...darn, I missed it! Can I get a do-over?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/26/2018 12:09:00 AM
Sorry no, and I have to be snotty about it.
Date: 10/25/2018 12:05:00 PM
LOVED the ending! hahahaha ;D (And on a serious note, this made me realize- regardless of life circumstances I would love to change... I am very glad to be me!). Nice work!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2018 4:50:00 PM
Thank you my friend; I believe most will come up to the same exact conclusion.
Date: 10/25/2018 6:08:00 AM
interesting poem // I enjoy
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2018 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab; I had fun with it for sure!
Date: 10/24/2018 11:22:00 PM
How did you know that? -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2018 1:24:00 AM
hahahahahahahaha

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