Ready Betty

A gentleman came calling for Betty.
The house Madam said wait on the settee.
Betty came running down.
Tried to change the man's frown.
But she had been so busy already.

This is for the Bawdy limy contest, though not very bawdy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Thank you for calling my visits a treat...Linda
Smith Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:57 PM
aww, she tired! lol.. congrats on a great win, Robert.. Hugs.. Arlene
Johnson Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Your comment reminds me of Madeline Kahn's song she sang on the movie, Blazing Saddles. Thanks. Gave me a chuckle. :)
A   Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 11:43 PM
Robert, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
Johnson Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Hello Linda, always a treat to hear from you. Now Go Write Something to comment on. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 4:05 PM
I remember this one and how much I liked it the first time. Congrats to you.
Johnson Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you, I guess I get points for being too decent to be too bawdy huh? :)
Nance Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Good job, it could be naughty ;-) i like it, grats on the win
Johnson Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Thanks Casarah. Appreciate your kind regards. :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 7:36 AM
That's great wit Robert, well penned! Congrats on huge win!
Mehta Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 6:18 AM
Nice light humor flows, robert. congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 4:52 PM
made me chuckle Robert congrats on the win. hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 4:29 PM
Quite good, though smooth round the edges; diplomatic. congrats on your win. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 3:28 PM
That is a busy house!!! And the joke at the end was clever!
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 3:28 PM
I think it is a bit bawdy, so it works!!
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