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The reading is the hardest bit To finish it with out a fit Of giggles from the waiting crowd As I try to speak out loud A poem that I know so well I’m nervous yet I try to quell The feeling I’ve forgotten it I’ll have to make it up a bit How did it go again ? That verse about the rain Just throw in an extra rhyme To try and buy a little time The poem that I tried to read From my mind, it has been freed And though I may have missed a bit I think I got away with it Contest : MY FUNNIEST POEM ON THE SOUP 11th place

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Date: 6/3/2011 5:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nick. Excellent piece. Nice going. Thanks for you kind words. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Nick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:20:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., nick
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:16:00 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:40:00 PM
Nick, ~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thanks for always supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:46:00 PM
Congrats Nick on your marvelous win with this witty write luv.. enjoy my friend.. super one..
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:05:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! really great... ^_^ ****jun-jun
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Date: 3/20/2010 4:35:00 PM
Ya ya did and it fits nicely
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:11:00 AM
Re reading Storm.. focusing on the last line.. two people making love..horizontal rain .. storm clouds in the sky.. its raining while making love.. wind billowing outside during the passionate excursion of emotion... that is the way I am Reading it now that I read it again.. but I am italian so every poem has a bit of passion in it for me... let me know if I uncovered the inner meaning Nick.. luv.."Sweetheart"
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