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The dramatic screenplay off the grid with twists and turns, bent and half-quid. Time rides loopty-loops, rebids, yanking bucket eyelids - trite for spilling squids. rewrite acid, book on skids - forbids kids. 11/7/2019 Rhyming Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 11/8/2019 9:36:00 AM
Lovely and well rhymed also. Enjoyed reading it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Ravi
Date: 11/7/2019 9:19:00 PM
'forbids kids' -- One way to make sure that kids will get their hands on it! This nonet is crackling with electricity, Kim! Smiles, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2019 9:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon!
Date: 11/7/2019 2:59:00 PM
Yes, the book is (nearly) always better! Should do well in the contest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2019 9:49:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 11/7/2019 11:17:00 AM
"yanking bucket eyelids - trite for spilling squids." That definitely created an image in my mind. : ) This was really cool my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2019 11:46:00 AM
Hugs to you, Chris! Glad you liked it!

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