Kim Rodrigues Poet Nonet

Read the Book

The dramatic screenplay off the grid
               with twists and turns, bent and half-quid.
                       Time rides loopty-loops, rebids,
                                   yanking bucket eyelids -
                                    trite for spilling squids.
                                                 rewrite acid,
                                                 book on skids -
                                                           forbids
                                                               kids.

11/7/2019
Rhyming Nonet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Ravi Sathasivam November 8, 2019 at 9:36 AM Lovely and well rhymed also. Enjoyed reading it. Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2019 at 9:41 AM Thank you, Ravi

Gershon Wolf November 7, 2019 at 9:19 PM 'forbids kids' -- One way to make sure that kids will get their hands on it! This nonet is crackling with electricity, Kim! Smiles, Gershon Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 9:49 PM Thanks so much, Gershon!

Michelle Faulkner November 7, 2019 at 2:59 PM Yes, the book is (nearly) always better! Should do well in the contest, Kim! Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 9:49 PM Thank you, Michelle!

Chris Green November 7, 2019 at 11:17 AM "yanking bucket eyelids - trite for spilling squids." That definitely created an image in my mind. : ) This was really cool my friend. Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 11:46 AM Hugs to you, Chris! Glad you liked it!