Margarita Lillico Poet Rhyme

Read Between the Eyes

Ignore the aging process laws,
Look deeper than my blemished pores.
Guess what? My ailing body lies,
The truth is in my youthful eyes.
Overlook that minor wrinkle,
Focus on this happy twinkle.

February 2, 2022
Contest : Bite Size

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Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 2:37 PM Lovely poem, Margarita ~

Paul Callus February 15, 2022 at 6:29 AM This lovely poem undoubtedly gives us an insight into your beautiful character, Margarita (so does your avatar)! ~ Congratulations on your fine win. ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France February 13, 2022 at 3:16 PM Margarita, congratulations on your placement in the contest, I really like your poem ~Constance

Unseeking Seeker February 12, 2022 at 8:36 PM Indeed, our innate vibrancy of aliveness retains its bubbling, joyous effervescence even as we age ~ enjoyed this mellifluous exultation of exuberance! Congrats on your win!

Gordon Mcconnell February 7, 2022 at 12:40 PM Such an insightful and uplifting piece Margarita, truly great imagery and lovely rhyme too. Keep spilling the ink, Gordon

John Gondolf February 6, 2022 at 4:55 AM This is sometimes very hard to do as I look in the mirror in the morning. Nicely written, Maggie. Hugs. Margarita Lillico February 6, 2022 at 5:05 AM I have a trick, less light, less stare! Hum a jolly tune, have a quick shave and walk away from the mirror, mirror :) XO

Rico Leffanta February 2, 2022 at 11:16 AM Clever!