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Read Between the Eyes

Ignore the aging process laws, Look deeper than my blemished pores. Guess what? My ailing body lies, The truth is in my youthful eyes. Overlook that minor wrinkle, Focus on this happy twinkle. February 2, 2022 Contest : Bite Size

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Date: 11/12/2022 2:37:00 PM
Lovely poem, Margarita ~
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Date: 2/15/2022 6:29:00 AM
This lovely poem undoubtedly gives us an insight into your beautiful character, Margarita (so does your avatar)! ~ Congratulations on your fine win. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/13/2022 3:16:00 PM
Margarita, congratulations on your placement in the contest, I really like your poem ~Constance
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Date: 2/12/2022 8:36:00 PM
Indeed, our innate vibrancy of aliveness retains its bubbling, joyous effervescence even as we age ~ enjoyed this mellifluous exultation of exuberance! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/7/2022 12:40:00 PM
Such an insightful and uplifting piece Margarita, truly great imagery and lovely rhyme too. Keep spilling the ink, Gordon
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Date: 2/6/2022 4:55:00 AM
This is sometimes very hard to do as I look in the mirror in the morning. Nicely written, Maggie. Hugs.
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Date: 2/6/2022 5:05:00 AM
I have a trick, less light, less stare! Hum a jolly tune, have a quick shave and walk away from the mirror, mirror :) XO
Date: 2/2/2022 11:16:00 AM
Clever!
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