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Even though you want to be read And you fall into your bed With your dreams in shreds And the realization That the very next time You log on to your account Your comments amount To zero read If it made sense in your head Know it does not matter if it was not read Because critics are not necessarily always right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/7/2012 2:15:00 PM
don't worry Christopher,you are a great poet,can I give a little advice read and comment,it not only helps to upgrade your mind it also builds a friendly link,good luck
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Date: 11/3/2012 5:09:00 PM
when poems from your soul/unroll like a scroll/as your pen writes them down though unread/your poems will extol/your efforts in whole/as phoenix arise from the dead
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Date: 11/3/2012 11:02:00 AM
Nicely said Christopher! Feedback is important but there comes a time in life when a poet gains confidence in his abilities and knows where he stands whether or not he gets feedback or worse, if he gets negative comments. Well written piece!
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Date: 11/2/2012 5:05:00 PM
Nice poem... Terry (at least, this time the number of your comments won't be 0)
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Date: 11/2/2012 4:39:00 PM
very true, love your poem, love elizabeth
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