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I fingered her caressing the fabric of her skin firm and tight she smelled like seashores in recluse a rescued delight a bottle spun inside the hallows tongues released her voice stretched from under cover opened, a journey to meet the sea feverish, fresh, full of antiquity I ate upon her knowledge basking between the darkened light lifting of the spirits an indication of another well spent hardened night

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/6/2020 12:37:00 PM

Wonderfully penned Panagiota xx

Ts Poetry
Date: 5/6/2020 4:57:00 PM

Thank you PR

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/30/2020 1:43:00 AM

Well this is all quite suggestive (does someone need to open a window?) "tongues released her voice" "I ate upon her knowledge" "hardened night" ....... you certainly know to put the reader in the scene. Yowza. I don't know if I have read something quite this erotic on this site before ... not my usual forte, but it's nice for a chance of pace. Well executed.

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/30/2020 5:55:00 PM

Thanks Timothy

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/26/2020 9:42:00 PM

Lovely, I find the words flow and ca imagine them with soft background music.

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/30/2020 5:55:00 PM

Thanks Arthur

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 4/26/2020 1:46:00 PM

phew, is it hot in here or what? I need to go for a swim in the Ocean....only problem is, there are restrictions...my ocean is Turquoise and Sapphire blue with white horses cresting emerald into aqua shallows. In the jewel-filled rockpools, starfish under rocks are found.

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/26/2020 7:57:00 PM

But of course

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/26/2020 2:13:00 PM

skinnydipping....you must be shy and retiring.

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/26/2020 1:49:00 PM

We can wait til nightfall xx