Ts Poetry Poet Personification

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I fingered her
caressing the fabric of her skin
firm and tight
she smelled like seashores
in recluse a rescued delight

a bottle spun inside the hallows
tongues released her voice
stretched from under cover
opened,
a journey to meet the sea

feverish, fresh, full of antiquity

I ate upon her knowledge
basking between the darkened light
lifting of the spirits
an indication of another
well spent hardened night

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Panagiota Romios May 6, 2020 at 12:37 PM Wonderfully penned Panagiota xx Ts Poetry May 6, 2020 at 4:57 PM Thank you PR

Timothy Hicks April 30, 2020 at 1:43 AM Well this is all quite suggestive (does someone need to open a window?) "tongues released her voice" "I ate upon her knowledge" "hardened night" ....... you certainly know to put the reader in the scene. Yowza. I don't know if I have read something quite this erotic on this site before ... not my usual forte, but it's nice for a chance of pace. Well executed. Ts Poetry April 30, 2020 at 5:55 PM Thanks Timothy

Arthur Vaso April 26, 2020 at 9:42 PM Lovely, I find the words flow and ca imagine them with soft background music. Ts Poetry April 30, 2020 at 5:55 PM Thanks Arthur

Lady Labyrinth April 26, 2020 at 1:46 PM phew, is it hot in here or what? I need to go for a swim in the Ocean....only problem is, there are restrictions...my ocean is Turquoise and Sapphire blue with white horses cresting emerald into aqua shallows. In the jewel-filled rockpools, starfish under rocks are found. Ts Poetry April 26, 2020 at 7:57 PM But of course Lady Labyrinth April 26, 2020 at 2:13 PM skinnydipping....you must be shy and retiring. Ts Poetry April 26, 2020 at 1:49 PM We can wait til nightfall xx