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I like her, she likes me
I kissed her, she kissed me
I love her, she loves me

I'm busy, she’s busy
I'm yelling, she’s screaming
I'm angry, she’s crying
I'm trying, she’s trying

I'm leaving, she’s leaving
I'm lonely, she’s lonely
I lost a love, she lost a friend
I never saw her, and she never saw me again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cruz Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Good write dude T.Y for the kind comment on Poets keep up the work :)
Brown Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jay. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Nice thoughts on passionate feelings for each other, Jay
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September 28, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Interesting write my friend...
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