Reaching the Deepest Ocean

My Beloved,
   Can you read me between the lines and verses,
   Can you feel my tender scarlet heart throbbing,
   with intense drumming emotions?
   Can you feel my fragile spirit,searching for you own?
   Searching in the corridors,reaching for your soul?
   as my ivory skin burns in flames of crackling fire.


My Baby,
  Can you feel the depth of wanting, and longing?
  Can you feel the aching for your touch?Can you
  feel me in your dreams,as my fingertips run down
  your spine in vertical motion,Needy for each and
  every part of who you are.Needy for that special
  man I came to care for and desire.

My Dearest,
 Can you close your deep warm eyes for just a moment,
 feel my pink soft lips brushing yours,as our toungues
 play in melodies of passion and love.
Yes,Love!Lust alone isn't enough for the broken hearted,
Everlasting Want is what we live for,two hearts lost and found,
Two Candles flickering in the darkness'Vast.

My  Love,
 Can you feel these Multitude of feelings,that I'm feeling?
 Everytime i mold your face in my imagination,sculpture
 you and all you are in my sweetest fantasy.Everytime I
 hear your voice echoing in the alleys and valleys of my mind.
 Can you feel these never ending emotions,shallower than the
 Missisippi River and Higher than the Alpi and Appenini.

My Sweet dream,
 Can you feel me in the Hiss of the night?In the gentle waft
 of waves hugging the rocks and secret caves?Can you feel me
 in the Wind'scented breeze,caressing your face?In the lullaby
 Of The Nightingale in sweetest melodies,till you fall so fast asleep,
 and dream,as a red robin dreams.

My Love,
 If you feel what I feel,and dream what i dream,Hold me in your 
 Misty dreams,and if you wake up to find me gone,Remember!
 Just remember,I love you,You live in my first awakening thought,
 and in my deepest lasting dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Zerbst Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 10:48 AM
Charmaine, you are the master of the sad poem tempered by some other quality. A ray of hope, a splash of sunlight, a future dream. Astounding!
Marcum Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 3:06 AM
smile? i said i love you for the last time because i thought that's what you want--not because that's what i want! what i wanted, i told you last night and a thousand times before--"I Love You"--i'll always love you-until the day i die-forevermore! everything has been soo messed up since i came back....my heart again, is broken!!!
Rhinem Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 7:17 AM
....Smile, An extraordinarilly passionate and magical poem dear, to say the absolute very least!!! ~ "Have The Most Beautiful Of Days, 'Beautiful Charma Charmaine,' My Love 'To You Always,' & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Bye Cinderella!":)
Rhinem Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 7:12 AM
....Smile, but it will be nice to dive back in so to speak and, enjoy the currents of hearts and souls as they, flow throughout these rivers of time....Smile, and "Yours, 'Your Waters,'" are "The Most Sparkling" by far and above all!!! ~ Smile, I just wanted to stop by to tell "You, How Beautiful, 'Your Beauty Is'" and, I shall see "Your Treasures" again upon this morning soon....Cont....
Rhinem Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 7:00 AM
....Smile, it definitely brings "You" to life, this write, inside of the readers hearts and before their eyes...."Breathing 'Your Beauty In," is all that they can do; that I can do!!! ~ Smile, I am going to be at The Soup today making some rounds which have been a long time coming; kind of like old times dear; as I begin to get my feet wet and, return to my sometimes, home away from home; Smile, well, maybe not to that extreme dear....Cont....
Rhinem Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 6:54 AM
....Smile, you know, as I did read "Your" words, and do read "Your" words, and shall read "Your Words," I was reminded once more, of how "Astonishingly Beautiful You Truly Are!!!" ~ Smile, for instance, not only does this flamingly passionate poem lift "Your Majesty" from upon its page of perfect, yet perfect it is, as its flows so fluently and wonderfully without missing a note or a beat....Smile, "So Beautiful My Dear, 'Beautiful, Charma Charmaine!!!"....Cont....
Rhinem Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 6:43 AM
Smile, "You Are Soo Amazing, 'Beautiful Charma Charmaine!!!" ~ Smile, good afternoon dear lady! I truly hope that "Your" day has been going splendidly for "You" thus far! Smile, I remember viewing "This Beautiful Poem Of Yours" here last week I believe, along with quite a few others; as I wished, to see how "Your Precious Heart" had been doing and, to breathe in again, "The Treasure Of Who 'You Are!!!'"....Cont....
A   Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 3:01 PM
very deep lets see if i can give this write a deeper thought about a shadow, in need of the humans touch,..p.d.
Fraser Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Delightful read Charmaine, i am glad you found it >> James
Chircop Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Dear Linda,I answered you..on your Pendulum poem:)
Sweetheart Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Your comments so special today mean so very much to me as Pendulum was written right after Ron left and Finale for the contest from a man's point of view leaving his wife... I try to fit the guidelines ..and since there are so many male poets I thought I would do it from that perspective ..appreciate your encouragement on these two poems.. how far is Malta from Italy? Ron was talking about us moving ... luv.. Linda-Marie
Chircop Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Re comment Ruben..to answer your question,,this is a poem i posted few months ago,i think in 2009,I found its rough copy..and reposted it ..tnx for your kind comments always and for your support..C harma:)
Peranteau Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 7:54 AM
Very happy that you have shared this exciting poetry with us Charmaine ! It is so pasionate, poetry is such a beautiful way of sharing the feelings of love ! Awesome ! james
White Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 7:30 AM
I envy your passion, it spills off the page!
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Very. Love is not a choice, it simply happens. I enjoyed the last quatrain.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Well I hope the lucky man who inspired u to write this creation knows how deeply u feel toward him... am saving this for next week's "visit" u know who will luv it ..he was touched by the others u wrote that I shared with him this morning and last night.. oh oh last night... yes... we had some time to read... new fav ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Kendrick Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Interesting love write...Passionate..Sara
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