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Reaching the Deepest Ocean

My Beloved, Can you read me between the lines and verses, Can you feel my tender scarlet heart throbbing, with intense drumming emotions? Can you feel my fragile spirit,searching for you own? Searching in the corridors,reaching for your soul? as my ivory skin burns in flames of crackling fire. My Baby, Can you feel the depth of wanting, and longing? Can you feel the aching for your touch?Can you feel me in your dreams,as my fingertips run down your spine in vertical motion,Needy for each and every part of who you are.Needy for that special man I came to care for and desire. My Dearest, Can you close your deep warm eyes for just a moment, feel my pink soft lips brushing yours,as our toungues play in melodies of passion and love. Yes,Love!Lust alone isn't enough for the broken hearted, Everlasting Want is what we live for,two hearts lost and found, Two Candles flickering in the darkness'Vast. My Love, Can you feel these Multitude of feelings,that I'm feeling? Everytime i mold your face in my imagination,sculpture you and all you are in my sweetest fantasy.Everytime I hear your voice echoing in the alleys and valleys of my mind. Can you feel these never ending emotions,shallower than the Missisippi River and Higher than the Alpi and Appenini. My Sweet dream, Can you feel me in the Hiss of the night?In the gentle waft of waves hugging the rocks and secret caves?Can you feel me in the Wind'scented breeze,caressing your face?In the lullaby Of The Nightingale in sweetest melodies,till you fall so fast asleep, and dream,as a red robin dreams. My Love, If you feel what I feel,and dream what i dream,Hold me in your Misty dreams,and if you wake up to find me gone,Remember! Just remember,I love you,You live in my first awakening thought, and in my deepest lasting dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/18/2013 10:48:00 AM
Charmaine, you are the master of the sad poem tempered by some other quality. A ray of hope, a splash of sunlight, a future dream. Astounding!
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Date: 5/7/2010 3:01:00 PM
very deep lets see if i can give this write a deeper thought about a shadow, in need of the humans touch,..p.d.
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Date: 4/22/2010 1:03:00 PM
Delightful read Charmaine, i am glad you found it >> James
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Date: 4/16/2010 12:48:00 PM
Dear Linda,I answered you..on your Pendulum poem:)
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Date: 4/16/2010 12:37:00 PM
Your comments so special today mean so very much to me as Pendulum was written right after Ron left and Finale for the contest from a man's point of view leaving his wife... I try to fit the guidelines ..and since there are so many male poets I thought I would do it from that perspective ..appreciate your encouragement on these two poems.. how far is Malta from Italy? Ron was talking about us moving ... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/16/2010 12:28:00 PM
Re comment Ruben..to answer your question,,this is a poem i posted few months ago,i think in 2009,I found its rough copy..and reposted it ..tnx for your kind comments always and for your support..C harma:)
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Date: 4/16/2010 7:54:00 AM
Very happy that you have shared this exciting poetry with us Charmaine ! It is so pasionate, poetry is such a beautiful way of sharing the feelings of love ! Awesome ! james
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Date: 4/16/2010 7:30:00 AM
I envy your passion, it spills off the page!
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Date: 4/15/2010 9:42:00 PM
Very. Love is not a choice, it simply happens. I enjoyed the last quatrain.
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Date: 4/15/2010 2:30:00 PM
Well I hope the lucky man who inspired u to write this creation knows how deeply u feel toward him... am saving this for next week's "visit" u know who will luv it ..he was touched by the others u wrote that I shared with him this morning and last night.. oh oh last night... yes... we had some time to read... new fav ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/15/2010 1:58:00 PM
Interesting love write...Passionate..Sara
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