Reaching

The strings move emotions high and low Following the keys with music so, Beautifully smooth and flowing along With a far reaching, soft, relaxing song A musical journey to lead all of those Listening intently through their woes Into the moment where you have a chance To fully live, listen and enhance Your very own reaching into your soul Where there, you can feel a sense of whole Heidi Sands 12/19/17

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Mike Gentile

Date: 12/20/2017 2:59:00 PM

Not only the music but your words create a wonderful flow here, Heidi A lovely poem xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/21/2017 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Thursday! :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/20/2017 2:40:00 PM

now you know why sometimes I have an instrumental piece with my poetry, either guitar or violin

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2017 2:44:00 PM

Exactly Frederic. Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2017 12:46:00 PM

Heidi, the poem is written with very lovely lines and rhyme with a message from heaven itself. A joy to read and a wonderful poem. All the best ... CayCay

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2017 12:50:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comment on this. I appreciate your feedback CayCay :)

Lu Loo

Date: 12/20/2017 11:26:00 AM

so beautiful sweet Heidi, you have such a good way with words...be blessed :)-luloo

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2017 12:07:00 PM

Thank you very much Luloo :)

John Gondolf

Date: 12/20/2017 5:13:00 AM

Heidi, nicely written. Music does have a big affect on mood; when I’ve had a really stressful day I listen to classical music and it really helps. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thank you John. It is nice to have music to relax with on the stressful days :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/19/2017 8:47:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I do like your poem.Your poem speaks to me. For me it is a feel good poem.Beautifully written. Have a nice evening my friend.Will be my favourite.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/29/2017 6:27:00 PM

Happy NewYear

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2017 7:10:00 AM

Hi Darlene. Thank you very much for your visit and kind comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/19/2017 5:23:00 PM

A melodic journey that brings peace..Very nice write Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2017 5:24:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/19/2017 4:41:00 PM

A rhythmic journey into uplifting, meaningful message!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2017 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your visit and feedback :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/19/2017 4:33:00 PM

Yes, it helps takes the listener on a journey. A lovely poem...

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thank you Arturo! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/19/2017 3:44:00 PM

Hi Heidi, This is this an uplifiting write. Your content and metaphors are on point.With that being said, music alone can do wonders to the soul. Good write:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2017 3:46:00 PM

Thank you Alexis :)