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Reach for Eternity

Reach for the eternal urged my brain Beauty’s a battle; kisses, marathons Butterflies flee their cocoons, wings wet in June A love song’s a tease, waning with the moon… Shouts surreal overwhelm eternity ~ staggered by uncertainty

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Date: 6/13/2025 4:28:00 PM
such profundity in the simplicity of your words...impressive and creativity. Liked it a great deal, Yellow Rose
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2025 8:51:00 PM
Appreciate your kind words, Yellow Rose.
Date: 6/13/2025 11:28:00 AM
Were you that gunslinger Gershon.? I've heard There was one that gave you no chance of Meeting His demands.? So you had to shoot it Out just to comply, when you died!!.' Lol)))
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Joe Maverick
Date: 6/13/2025 1:45:00 PM
I mean..Reach for the sky.?? That was hard enough G W.!!
Date: 6/13/2025 2:37:00 AM
Profound from top to bottom and all around. I read it 3 times, just cause I felt the urge to do so, and it just got more and more profoundider. Good write, Gershon (hope all is golden). Love, CayCay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2025 8:50:00 PM
3x read = 'profoundider,' eh? That's quite the word there, CayCay. Smiles, gw
Date: 6/13/2025 2:28:00 AM
Gershon, don’t reach for eternity too soon, spend some time with the stars and the moon… Beryl
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2025 8:51:00 PM
OK. Sounds reasonable, Beryl. Thanks for the advice. ~ gw

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