Reach for Eternity

      Reach for the eternal urged my brain
         Beauty’s a battle; kisses, marathons
       
      Butterflies flee their cocoons, wings wet in June
         A love song’s a tease, waning with the moon…

      Shouts surreal overwhelm eternity 
         ~ staggered by uncertainty
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 4:28 PM
such profundity in the simplicity of your words...impressive and creativity. Liked it a great deal, Yellow Rose
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Appreciate your kind words, Yellow Rose.
Maverick Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Were you that gunslinger Gershon.? I've heard There was one that gave you no chance of Meeting His demands.? So you had to shoot it Out just to comply, when you died!!.' Lol)))
Maverick Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 1:45 PM
I mean..Reach for the sky.?? That was hard enough G W.!!
Godwin Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 2:37 AM
Profound from top to bottom and all around. I read it 3 times, just cause I felt the urge to do so, and it just got more and more profoundider. Good write, Gershon (hope all is golden). Love, CayCay
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:50 PM
3x read = 'profoundider,' eh? That's quite the word there, CayCay. Smiles, gw
Edmonds  Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 2:28 AM
Gershon, don’t reach for eternity too soon, spend some time with the stars and the moon… Beryl
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:51 PM
OK. Sounds reasonable, Beryl. Thanks for the advice. ~ gw
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