John Loving Iii Poet Free verse

(re Write) Nothing

Tis nothing to say I love you
Tis nothing to say Be mine
Tis nothing now a days to make
promises to The Allmighty Devine
Tis nothing for me to tell myself 
that I'll love you till the end of time
Tis nothing till I wait for all 
spirals to unwind
all unions to unbind
all joined together to fall apart
the destruction of everything called art
Till I capture the love 
of your soul and heart
I am nothing
not even a spark

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Carolyn Devonshire July 17, 2010 at 6:54 AM Your poem captures the urgency of one who wishes to have love returned so well, John. But in my life you are more than a spark -- a bright ray of sunshine that brings joy. Love, Carolyn

Phyllis Babcock July 16, 2010 at 8:50 PM Yes, you do sparkle our hearts on the soup with your poetry. God Bless Phyl

C.C Bloomsfield July 14, 2010 at 6:35 AM You are not a spark,but you sparkle our hearts with sweet poetry,dear john..Celene

Diiamond Rich July 13, 2010 at 6:54 AM A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson July 12, 2010 at 5:18 PM Very nice write. Have a great day! Scarlett

Sara Kendrick July 12, 2010 at 3:50 PM Hope that you get that spark..Sara