(re Post) Forsaken

it's forbidden for me to love
yet thoughts light on me like a dove
with hell fire beaconing me to fly away
yet my soul welcomes sweet ideals to stay
don't go away; stay
in my arms
sway to songs
written so long ago

but ancient ears listen
and spread rumors to eyes that glisten

how hungry are those that wait
who's hearts become filled with hate
and malice intended for the sake of hate
that causes worlds to shake
and feet to slip into fiery lake
dragged down by those forsaken 
those from whom love was taken

they open our mouths and feed us hate
the sweetness of love has left
the  bitterest taste
true repentance reveals our mistake
safety of life and sanity at stake
from whom love may requires
our life take
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Anish Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 9:52 AM
I find your poem of great interest. "Sweetness of love" Sounds good to me. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
Guzzi Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 4:54 PM
very deep and full write, passion and comapssion. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Third stanza first three lines...People are hungry and filled with hate really don't know what is wrong..Some of them have been that way so long that there is no telling what it would take to crack the concrete wall...However, prayer for those in need of this breaking of the wall...We in America need to pray...If just the people on poetry soup that believe would start to pray miracles could begin to happen...Sara
Babcock Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 8:48 PM
An excellent write John God Bless Phyl
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 6:56 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future John. Love, Carol
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