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Re Awakening

Alone candle light in the abyss of darkness Yet words are woven in creations of your smile, The sweetest words are those not said intense timeless When in your embrace one melts to your unique style. Your flame renewed kindle in sweet resurrection Emerald eyes that glow in lust of perfection, Can but dowse puritan thoughts with insurrection Rebellion is kindled in this new affection Fires of passion the candle lit the abyss To burn forever more in the flame of true love To melt in your arms with the promise of a kiss The iron hand now firmly in the velvet glove Love like this has never before been given birth My life my love this is your awakened loving worth Collaboration Between © Mandy Tams & ©Harry J Horsman 29/04/2013

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Date: 8/5/2014 9:39:00 AM
A re wakening indeed, what and why can i write poetry like this is so obvious, from within as simple as that, enhanced by possibly the finest poet of them all,,Mandy Golden Girl Tams....spent a whole day reading comments on your poetry,,,oh yes the answers are all in there,,
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:51:00 AM
Is this for the love letter contest?...Its great, Mandy!
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Date: 4/30/2013 9:55:00 PM
Wow...quite the love story....nice....
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Date: 4/30/2013 3:59:00 PM
A collaboration of the best quality! - Gorgeous!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/30/2013 3:17:00 PM
aha, it sounds like one for the love letter contest!! Very sonnet-esque, mandy!! I enjoyed seeing you portrayed as Carol Burnette on that blog of Cyndi's. You have her humor and tender heart.
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:44:00 PM
So many wonderful lines, each one a poem in itself. My favorite "The iron hand now firmly in the velvet glove". Very deep an meaningful passion
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Date: 4/30/2013 10:47:00 AM
To bounce of your inspiration is inspiration in it's self, thanks Golden Girl, your name is so apt.....
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