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Bite size 92 poetry contest

Line Gauthier sponsored

Written 6/10/2024

15 syllables x 6 lines.

Razors edge

Walking bare feet on a razor’s edge across the swollen sea,
turning back is never an option, there is no where to flee!
many miles still to go, your journey has just about started,
You hope and dream for a rescue, pray you will soon be escorted,
Such is journey for many in this world, life is such a strain,
be the saviour in their lives, reach out to save them from their pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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M  Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 11:29 PM
Love the Title and love the poem Krish!…sadly so many do walk the razors edge which is incredibly sad! Debx
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 2:57 AM
Thanks Deb! True! Wish we could help. Sometimes we cannot because so many meaningless barriers! Thanks for your thumbs up
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 12:11 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad write. "Good Luck"  Have a blessed day/week writing away...................
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 12:21 PM
Thanks Paula! Many walk the Razor’s edge!
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