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Bite size 92 poetry contest

Line Gauthier sponsored

Written 6/10/2024

15 syllables x 6 lines.

Walking bare feet on a razor’s edge across the swollen sea, turning back is never an option, there is no where to flee! many miles still to go, your journey has just about started, You hope and dream for a rescue, pray you will soon be escorted, Such is journey for many in this world, life is such a strain, be the saviour in their lives, reach out to save them from their pain.

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Date: 10/6/2024 11:29:00 PM
Love the Title and love the poem Krish!…sadly so many do walk the razors edge which is incredibly sad! Debx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/7/2024 2:57:00 AM
Thanks Deb! True! Wish we could help. Sometimes we cannot because so many meaningless barriers! Thanks for your thumbs up
Date: 10/6/2024 12:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad write. "Good Luck"  Have a blessed day/week writing away...................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/6/2024 12:21:00 PM
Thanks Paula! Many walk the Razor’s edge!

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