Razor Sharp

When Jesus Christ was, "Sir Come Sized"
His mum said, "That was ill-advised!
In a pinch
One more inch
Can certainly be organised!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Horsman Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 1:28 AM
Clever poetry, Rico
Leffanta Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 11:28 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 8:14 PM
G'day Rico ... excellent play on words old Mate - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Still climbing to match your mastery! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 1:14 PM
The poem, then the comments... well said. xomo
Leffanta Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Mahalo nui loa, Mo! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 12:57 PM
hilarious, rico! great title, too...
Leffanta Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 1:10 PM
It was prompted by a report that most Americans believe Jesus was "white", so I thought to remind them he was also chopped! Aloha! Rico
Devonshire Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Hilarious, Rico! It makes me cringe just to think of circumcision. Hugs, Carolyn
Leffanta Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 1:05 PM
I always wondered why, if people were made in God's image, they would want to mutilate it - or adorn it? Aloha! Rico
Keely Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 11:21 AM
Ouch! but funny, as always!!
Leffanta Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 1:08 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Having experienced women who have been circumcised as well as those who have not, I think anyone who would do that to a girl should be removed from society permanently! Aloha! Rico
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