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Razor Sharp

When Jesus Christ was, "Sir Come Sized" His mum said, "That was ill-advised! In a pinch One more inch Can certainly be organised!"

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Date: 8/16/2020 1:28:00 AM
Clever poetry, Rico
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/16/2020 11:28:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/15/2020 8:14:00 PM
G'day Rico ... excellent play on words old Mate - thanks Rico - Lindsay
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Date: 8/16/2020 11:27:00 AM
Still climbing to match your mastery! Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/15/2020 1:14:00 PM
The poem, then the comments... well said. xomo
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Date: 8/16/2020 11:27:00 AM
Mahalo nui loa, Mo! Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/15/2020 12:57:00 PM
hilarious, rico! great title, too...
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/15/2020 1:10:00 PM
It was prompted by a report that most Americans believe Jesus was "white", so I thought to remind them he was also chopped! Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/15/2020 12:02:00 PM
Hilarious, Rico! It makes me cringe just to think of circumcision. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2020 1:05:00 PM
I always wondered why, if people were made in God's image, they would want to mutilate it - or adorn it? Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/15/2020 11:21:00 AM
Ouch! but funny, as always!!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/15/2020 1:08:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Having experienced women who have been circumcised as well as those who have not, I think anyone who would do that to a girl should be removed from society permanently! Aloha! Rico

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