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Rays of the summer sun, beaming down past noon All the fun is winding down, as the sun will fade soon From a supine position, I watch swallows take hold Of the sky, as the sun still glows like 24 karat gold Date written and posted: 05/11/2019

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Date: 5/15/2019 8:08:00 PM
Oh yeah, definitely, a summer's feel, best wishes on this Edward, Aloha wk
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/16/2019 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, William:-)

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