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Rays of the Summer Sun

Rays of the summer sun, beaming down past noon
 All the fun is winding down, as the sun will fade soon

   From a supine position, I watch swallows take hold
    Of the sky, as the sun still glows like 24 karat gold



Date written and posted: 05/11/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Oh yeah, definitely, a summer's feel, best wishes on this Edward, Aloha wk
Ibeh Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Thank you, William:-)
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