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Rays of Hope

Through the stone keyhole, Shards of light beckons the stones: As darkness submits.

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Sharon Winter

Date: 5/5/2010 12:37:00 PM

Raul, I have been wanting to enter your contests for so long. You are such a master poet, to have placed in your contest is an absolute honor. Thank you my dear friend. You are a joy to know. hugs, shar xoxo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 8:41:00 AM

Good Morning Raul. You are a Ray Of Hope to many of us here at the Soup with your amazing poetry and your contests. I love seeing through your eyes. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 6:38:00 PM

A fine presentation Raul on the contest subject. Thanks so much for choosing my poem for one of the winners. Agape, Moses

John Beam

Date: 4/22/2010 5:53:00 PM

thank you and i see that very nice write

Date: 4/22/2010 3:43:00 PM

Wow! This is awesome! Yes, with hope, darkness does submit. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for choosing my poem as one of your winners. I appreciate the opportunity. Karen

Rick Parise

Date: 4/22/2010 2:02:00 PM

Very nice!!!Rick

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 1:51:00 PM

You have described the photo you posted beautifully, Raul. I have seen a lot of great haikus submitted for your contest. Have fun judging them -- it may be tough. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 4/22/2010 1:30:00 PM

Super write if its your take on the picture Raul, nice one >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2010 1:10:00 PM

Raul, thanks so much for the recent win. It's hard for me to view the winners on this school computer. But I finally got to see it. IS this haiku here for another picture you have put up?? I love it! andrea