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Rays From the Heavens

Heavens rays shine down Capturing blue, icy waves On ice crystal stones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/29/2010 5:06:00 AM
chilly.................
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:05:00 PM
Very nice Susan...enjoyed...good luck in the contest....Marty
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Date: 3/26/2010 5:57:00 PM
Ice crystal stones....wow that is nicely said!! Good luck Susan...a job well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/26/2010 1:50:00 PM
very nice hope for contest if so good luck faleshia
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Date: 3/26/2010 12:08:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:13:00 AM
Beautiful haiku, Susan. It has a spiritual quality that I think Raul will appreciate. Best wishes for success in his contest. Love, Carolyn
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