Rays From the Heavens

Heavens rays shine down
Capturing blue, icy waves
On ice crystal stones.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Byrne Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 5:06 AM
chilly.................
Owens Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 10:05 PM
Very nice Susan...enjoyed...good luck in the contest....Marty
Richards Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 5:57 PM
Ice crystal stones....wow that is nicely said!! Good luck Susan...a job well done! ~ Carrie
Murphy Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 1:50 PM
very nice hope for contest if so good luck faleshia
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March 26, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing!! Karen
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Beautiful haiku, Susan. It has a spiritual quality that I think Raul will appreciate. Best wishes for success in his contest. Love, Carolyn
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