Ray

dear red deer, all-clear orange forest, rustic chill autumn sunrise smiled...

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/29/2023 7:11:00 PM

Nana your poem paints a picturesque scene of an autumn morning with vibrant imagery and a serene atmosphere. The play on words with "dear red deer" and "all-clear" evokes a sense of warmth and familiarity within nature's embrace. The vivid description of the orange forest and the tranquil ambiance captures the essence of a crisp autumn dawn, while the phrase "autumn sunrise smiled" beautifully personifies nature, infusing the scene with a gentle, comforting energy. - Happy New Year, - Blessings, Daniel