Rawsome

Rawsome
It is indestructible and Rawsome,
Something Raw, Pure and Awesome,
Build it, misuse it, try to destroy it from within,
Before today Rawsome had never been,
When you combine it’s elements into a single alloy,
It’s Rawsome attributes can bring on tears of joy,
When the hard work of the day is done,
Some beers and Rawsome friends drinking in the Sun,
The day that my oldest son was born,
Was a Rawsome day I will remember forever more,
Another Rawsome day in my life,
Was the day I met my Rawsome Wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/5/2011 6:47:00 PM
congrats to you Ross on your big win
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Date: 3/5/2011 12:31:00 AM
well ross you have over rawsomed me with this beast of a write! best winning wishes to you!
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Date: 3/4/2011 6:25:00 AM
Rawsome job and congrats. BG
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Date: 3/4/2011 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Ross. I can just imagine Paula sitting there trying to pronounce some of the words in her contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/3/2011 8:50:00 PM
Clever new word, Ross, and I like the way your worked it into your poem. Rawsome work! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2011 8:07:00 PM
I really loved this one... it was rawsome to say the reast! Great work!
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Date: 3/3/2011 7:48:00 PM
Congrats Ross on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this awesome write and new word .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:11:00 AM
Nice expressions you have penned so well on Rawsome, Ross
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