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Raw Love Celebration

You incite me 
You're exciting
Are you providing a sheltered love?
No objection

I need your thoughtful care
I enjoy you more and more each day
Delicious affection a heavenly constellation
Confetti ready

Drowning in celebration
Raw winged spell bound 
Roaring anticipation
Michel Angelo  Sistine

The ceiling how appealing
Becoming undone at the seams
I'm straightening when ever I
Lean in to hear you whisper

Intensifying breaths of roses
I am pouring this love out to you 
In desperation, episodes of heart
Pounding contemplation 

Fluttering hearts contagion
Of sonnet say it seductively
Am I your royal joy?
I will not faulter in this

Honor I am your Roy Roy
You are the maitre d' of me.
Enjoy be clever and thinly coy
Diligently love me free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/15/2017 9:13:00 PM
Great passion Val, a pleasure to read...
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Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 6/17/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you forever Charlie!!

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