Raw Deal
It was funny at first
But now after further investigation
I think the bubble has burst
And it's not that funny after all
And we can't change it
We are stuck with it
And it
Is irritating
It's like a New Year's resolution 24 month Gym contract
Direct Debit on your Bank Account
You wish you could take back
Like the Exercise Bike and Treadmill
But you can't
Because they are passed the point of no return
And the only burn you feel
Is the raw deal
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