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Raw Deal

It was funny at first But now after further investigation I think the bubble has burst And it's not that funny after all And we can't change it We are stuck with it And it Is irritating It's like a New Year's resolution 24 month Gym contract Direct Debit on your Bank Account You wish you could take back Like the Exercise Bike and Treadmill But you can't Because they are passed the point of no return And the only burn you feel Is the raw deal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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