Raw

Stripped of pride
Uncensored
Long car ride
Not a word 
Instant reaction
Sugar free
Painful contraction
Every three
Sky high credit
Not a dime
No time to edit
Too far behind
Prayer group
Honest tears
Truthful soup
For all your peers
Garden to table
No additives
Horse and stable
Humbly lives 
Straight from utter
To your lips
Country crock butter
God given hips
Evil cancer
Body, a shell
Jesus the answer
Remains smell
Spirit gone
Lovers behind
Moving on
Can't rewind 
Red handed
Un tampered
Pre sanded
Nothing pampered
Being frank
Nothing un breakable
Titanic sank
God was capable
Thoughts in head
Before tongue
Post said
How it stung
Anything real
No alterations
How you deal
With situations
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:16 PM
Wow, xomo & mo hugs
Pinet Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 1:48 PM
A raw rap like poem that flows with a carefree beat that elicits further thought. Emile.
Gifford Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 10:11 AM
I felt your raw images and many will relate to your poem. ~~Darlene
Deremer Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:17 PM
Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed it.
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