Raw

Creation requires
No rules 
just rambling
lying your heart on the page
even if its a bit grammatically incorrect
at least there was a release
everything is revisible 
but I think the first thoughts
to come to a poets mind are the most unique
their unfiltered
and undiluted
and at its purest form
is when poetry is at its greatest
because it speaks the truth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 12:15 PM
Beautiful poetry.
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May 7, 2009 at 7:01 AM
nice! Love this! You are so right and write Shahana... :) Izzy
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