Ravens of Kilifi

they are slender
like anorexic size zero models
attired totally in black
like undertakers 
announcing the bad news

and they have this annoying caw
that they like startling us with
they go hide behind the leaves 
of the huge mango tree
a whole clan of them
ravens
then on cue
they fly out suddenly cawing loudly
making everyone start
and stand shocked at their stunt

they eat everything i think
like vultures
but they are ever thin
because they are thieves

yesterday one snatched away
a piece of fried potato
from an unsuspecting child's hand
the kid looked up at the flying raven
with a sad weepy look
and a shiny oily hand
full of the promise of nothing

i wish they  would disappear
these black undertakers
but somehow life would be unbearable
for they too have great uses

were it not for them
the shore-side i love sitting on
would forever smell of
fish scales and insides
that the fishermen throw there

and so they irritate me
with their annoying caw
and fill me me with foreboding
when they caw at night for 
for i am superstitious
and they startle me always
in the evenings
 when they perform their endless stunts
but when i sit on the clean shore
and unleash a biscuit 
that they caw greedily at
as they stare down at me
from the baobab trees above
i munch peacefully
smelling only the salty sea
I'm accustomed to
then gratefully, and begrudgingly so
i smile up
in a love hate way
at these annoying ravens of kilifi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Alumbugu Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 7:36 AM
True words...everything has its use. Enjoyed
Manyass Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 8:29 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem; the description of the raven's hussles and hustles very vivid and beautiful. Secondly it arouses in me a sense of nostalgia, savouring the beautiful shores of kilifi where nature seemed to be at peace with itself. Thanks Hellen for sharing this gem...Oh i am new here, and i am going back to read more.
Masido Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 10:46 AM
i am glad you enjoyed. :)) thanks for commenting
Brown Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 7:01 PM
Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Hellen. Love, Carol
Masido Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 10:47 AM
havin a crappy monday but u put a smile on my face :) glad you enjoyed my poetry Carol. cheers!
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