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Ravens

Ravens scream at each other

   is she really mad?

      do birds cry?







for Dr. Ram Mehta's Quinzaine contest
       7-5-3 syllables

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2011 at 8:00 AM

Congratulations Francine on your win in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "Quinzaine" Love, Carol

Jack Horne

July 16, 2011 at 1:43 PM

Many congrats on your wins, Francine : )

John Freeman

July 16, 2011 at 12:21 PM

Francine, Many congrtulations on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

July 16, 2011 at 7:59 AM

Oh I'm sure they communicate in various moods as we do. We just don't see different expressions. Good luck in Dr. Rams contest Francine :)

Wilma Neels

July 16, 2011 at 4:18 AM

Francine, congratulations on your awesome win in Dr. Ram's contest with this gem.. ;-)

David Williams

July 16, 2011 at 12:36 AM

hey Francine congrats on a great win. David

Andrea Dietrich

July 15, 2011 at 7:53 PM

Oh it reminds me of the Prince song, when doves cry. Very nice, Fancine. Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 15, 2011 at 6:43 PM

Congrats Francine on your big win with this great piece ..full of originality .. so unique luv..

Black Eyed Susan

July 15, 2011 at 3:35 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 15, 2011 at 2:50 PM

Nice secret talk with lovely humor, Francine. Congratulations

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 12, 2011 at 7:34 AM

Enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Francine. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

July 12, 2011 at 12:07 AM

Boy, you make me want to check out this form and dr. Ram's contest. I am REALLY behind at Soup these days. Thanks again for my win in your contest. It must have been difficult to judge!

Don Johnson

July 11, 2011 at 8:57 PM

Straight from the birds movie, perhaps are you there Rod Taylor. good 2 ok verse babe, love, Don

Francine Roberts

July 11, 2011 at 9:09 PM

ya that would be the birds movie playing in the front yard

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 11, 2011 at 8:26 PM

wonderful visual with this write Francine.. feeling the ravens crowing and asking same questions luv.. good luck in the contest with this sure to please winner ...

Ravens

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