Ravens

Ravens in black trench coats
step precariously across wet rocks
of a foggy Pacific coast beach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richards Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 7:21 AM
I loved George's comment! Yes...those ravens seem to have trouble brewing! Cute one, Valerie! ......P.S. Do you live on the pacific Canadian coast?? :) Carrie
Anos Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 9:55 PM
You made them look like mafia button men cavorting hehehe! Nice one! Brgds. george
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