Ravenous

An eye set on the now
Surrounded in a forbidden, black elegance
Swiftly scanning the ground below
As reds and yellows ignite the once dark sky
And a thought takes flight
In search of opportunity
Forever; An investigation
Curiously but carefully,
Transformation takes time
But excretes a true form
Foraging a forgotten dream
Once held so close and dear to the heart,
Turned upside down
And uplifted sorrows; Alone with the sky
Feeling real matrimony
They enclosed the circle
As the sun clutched his heart
Freeing past complications
And making life seem so simple,
To just keep on living.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 14, 2010 at 4:17 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Kristen. Love, Carol
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October 21, 2010 at 12:10 PM
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