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Ravenous

An eye set on the now Surrounded in a forbidden, black elegance Swiftly scanning the ground below As reds and yellows ignite the once dark sky And a thought takes flight In search of opportunity Forever; An investigation Curiously but carefully, Transformation takes time But excretes a true form Foraging a forgotten dream Once held so close and dear to the heart, Turned upside down And uplifted sorrows; Alone with the sky Feeling real matrimony They enclosed the circle As the sun clutched his heart Freeing past complications And making life seem so simple, To just keep on living.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/14/2010 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Kristen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2010 12:10:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kristen. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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