11/11/2024 for Bitesize 93 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier
The raven loosened up his belt and had himself a patty melt. “Don’t eat so much”, I did implore As he spat out an apple core. Quoth the raven, “I’ll have some more.”
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