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11/11/2024 for Bitesize 93 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

The raven loosened up his belt and had himself a patty melt. “Don’t eat so much”, I did implore As he spat out an apple core. Quoth the raven, “I’ll have some more.”

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Date: 11/26/2024 9:35:00 PM
delightful ~
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David Crandall
Date: 11/26/2024 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Line!
Date: 4/30/2024 7:56:00 PM
LOL…a unique take on Poe’s raven
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David Crandall
Date: 4/30/2024 8:49:00 PM
I had to go deep for that one! :-)

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