Ravenous
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11/11/2024 for Bitesize 93 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier
The raven loosened up his belt
and had himself a patty melt.
“Don’t eat so much”, I did implore
As he spat out an apple core.
Quoth the raven, “I’ll have some more.”
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2024
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