Ravenous

Let go of all your inhibitions lay your head upon my chest listen to my heart pang for you and let my fingers do the rest slowly moving across your body tingling inside with your every need entranced this new found adoration ravenous, all night, they'll feed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Curtis Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 8:32 AM
I know this dream, waking up wondering what the heck happened to the pillow ! lol
Vaso Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 2:24 AM
Jut dont give the ravens your address!!! Loved this one!!!
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 11:01 PM
The Tim Tam Man strikes again! Wonderful romantic write, matey
Nicole Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 9:25 PM
That tingling sensation- may it never leave. This is so sensual and sweet, all at the same time. :) Brandy
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Ok. One more poem like that and you WILL fry my old iPad. Trying to type with oven mitts on is someth'n else. And in a freakn heat wave no less. ;)
Gondolf Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Another nice one, Tim. I am going to read some more later. John
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