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Raven Hair

I have so often thought Of your raven black hair Perfectly inhuman Beyond my perception Something that I relished Internally, with hope Someday I might touch it I still see its blue sheen Curls that looked like feathers And they brushed your shoulders I dreamed while I watched you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/11/2011 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on hair with nice images, David
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:22:00 AM
Lovely romantic exciting adventure in your words David my friend.. hope u have been well and happy.. wonderful imagery expresses the feelings so deep with a touch of that black hair perfectly inhuman.. interesting parallel luv..
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Date: 5/11/2011 3:42:00 AM
Very romantic for your love..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2011 12:25:00 AM
A good, slightly moody, love poem. Hints of unrequited love here. Is this the love that got away, or is there still hope, I wonder? We all like to live in hope. Regards, Robert.
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