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Rave Notice

Dark fingers rained a thousand captured chords Ranging like restless fireflies under glass Gathered notes in freakish trilling hordes Offering the Danse Macabre pass. Sensuous and delicate on the keys Before the great unmoving cause So arranged to haunt the sad demise The pallor over pasted triplets falls. Restive sighs are pierced by plunging swords Of dissonance, the soul cannot appease His thunderous triumph, ovation soon affords The master well-deserved, if outlandish, fees. ["Rave Notice" first appeared in The Hoosier Challenger, 1968; written c. 1967, it was reprinted in The Lady in the Pink Hat, Candor Press, 1969.] FIRST PLACE WINNER Brian Strand's "All Yours" Contest Poetry Soup - April 9, 2021

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Date: 4/8/2021 6:20:00 AM
Exceptional piece--a vivid blend of literal and figurative language! Janice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2021 9:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Janice. I appreciated your assessment...right on target, like you generally are!
Date: 4/7/2021 3:23:00 PM
wow, it's an oldie but goodie!!! one to rave about! YES!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/7/2021 3:28:00 PM
Yup, I wrote this probably 50 years ago. But I like it, so I thought it was worth sharing with you Soupers. Thanks for your kind comment. I recently received a copy of my first chapbook (that I had lost) and I have been enjoying these old poems. I'll keep sharing them until someone says, "Enuff!"

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