Raul Moreno's Contest; Awaiting Dawn

heavy clouds promise
mountains greedy for water
placid bowl reflects
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations Virginia. Agape, Moses
Muzzey Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations on placeing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl
Foster Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:23 PM
This certainly deserves its place among the winners. it is very well written Virginia...Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:18 PM
congratulations, Virginia!
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Virginia. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Virginia, Congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
Richards Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Nicely done, a painted picture! Best wishes in the contest, Virginia! ~ Carrie
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February 19, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Wonderful Haiku and good luck in the new contest... my entry is alba di attesa which is Italian for Awaiting Dawn.. just wanted to be a little more creative for the entry... super words Virginia.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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